ODE to Bananamilk
tasty and sweet
what a delicious treat
It always wait me to drink
mother likes you
father likes you
brother likes you
and I like you
all of my family likes you
soft and aromatic
yummy and fantastic
it always wait me to drink
mother likes you
father likes you
brother likes you
and I like you
all of my family like you
I like you
we like you
we like you
they like you
everybody likes you
Banana milk looks like delicious. You use many words, but some words repeated. I want you to write many story.
ReplyDeleteVery good ode!!! I want to drink banana milk ㅠㅠ
ReplyDeleteI miss banana milk~
ReplyDeleteJiyoung,
ReplyDeleteCute ode. I liked that you used a good range of vocabulary, although some of your lines were repetitive. The second stanza was redundant. The way to avoid that is to try and be more creative in elaborating your ideas.